So today I met with Dr. Lorde and we discussed my proposal and topic. She suggested that i take out the whole section on subliminal messaging, I had done some research on this but not too much so it will not be a huge loss. While talking about my topic Dr. Lorde said i should narrow my scope further. She suggested that i pick a couple commercials or ads to analyze for my apaer, and include in the appendix. After the meeting I do not feel quite as worried, before i was quite worried that she was not going to accept my topic. In class we did peer reviews, I did not get too much feedbakc from my reviewer so I will just have to use my instincts on my revisions, I think I have an idea of where I am headed with it.